12 June 2008

55: the remix

this
will live
longer than stone

longer
than statues
in Baghdad squares

because
my love
makes these lines

you
live here
till end times

2 comments:

EILEEN said...

sweet!

AlexG said...

thx Eileen. it means so much coming from you.

it's as close as I can get to a sonnet in the hay(na)ku form.