tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9101570.post4605817402739117585..comments2023-12-29T07:21:43.271-07:00Comments on Arroyo Chamisa: Savage CanticlesAlex Gildzenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16858525907800097129noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9101570.post-63466620373834364072007-11-11T19:55:00.000-07:002007-11-11T19:55:00.000-07:00you honor me Steve with such a careful reading.tha...you honor me Steve with such a careful reading.<BR/><BR/>thank you.Alex Gildzenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16858525907800097129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9101570.post-24786543302423207622007-11-11T16:56:00.000-07:002007-11-11T16:56:00.000-07:00Wicked nifty, thrifty poem, poming, poetry, lines,...Wicked nifty, thrifty poem, poming, poetry, lines, Alex!<BR/><BR/>The second time through, the stanza, lines, second half of #3 really caught me. First, from "lost" and "discovers" simply in the abstract, then from the deeper sense that the pastry chef was "lost," feeling lost, until he "discovers" the "physique model." You probably won't tell us whether he's lost because he's lonely or he's lost because he, say, couldn't find the "roses" that he'd made for a certain cake, but I could easily read it either way.<BR/><BR/>Anywho, I surely enjoy the whole thing.<BR/><BR/>I like that the "portfolio of malice / spiders into / every century" sans "strategy," not just "invitation," and I suspect that that is why it "spiders" into, spiders and malice so often operating without clear strategy and all. Malice, no strategy...<BR/>Like that very much.<BR/><BR/>Canticles, Cantus, Cantos?Stevehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12130438006583799672noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9101570.post-90244355483118813102007-11-11T16:43:00.000-07:002007-11-11T16:43:00.000-07:00This comment has been removed by the author.Stevehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12130438006583799672noreply@blogger.com